Siken

i have read itand like the others i also got hooked really fast after two chapters can't wait for more.and for other readers your missing out in this novel peak.

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Only shooting stars

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

Chapter 1's are supposed to be an introduction to the story, in here we get into action fairly quickly and I can't really say much since we don't get more in the chapter... Frankly I hate stories that are written in this way, to be short, each speaker NEEDS to be given their own paragraph + use quotation marks when someone is speaking etc...

Beni obeyed. Then, return to his position after knowing what tasks he did.

The others laugh as they tease Rio. If Riza is their group's doctor,and Marcel is elite warrior, this little guy that have the same age as Riza, is simply  their genius tactician.

"You found him?"